"Until this ghastly tale is told, this heart within me burns" (Coleridge)
Wow. That was pretty bloody ROUGH.
Dear Subbers, I love you..Sorry, the emotion got away from me then…But seriously: you are all just so forgiving!!! BLESS YOU ALL!!
This morning’s post, which I was so keen to put up as I’d had such a full weekend it was like I went to sleep Friday night, woke to find it was Monday morning – well, I put it up while it was STILL SO ROUGH! Oh yuck, oh yuck!.Forgive me, Readers, for I have binned.That rough draft, shhhhhhhudddddddder, is now in the bin. .I’ve reattended it. I’m not saying my redraft is anything*G*L*O*R*I*O*U*S, but a little more acceptable. Here it is, if you’re interested – just letting you know..Oh, shudder….You’re so forgiving – & you even said lovely things! Ah, bless ye.XX BLESS YE! xx.THANK YOU for being there, so I can aim. You can’t imagine how grateful I am, unless you’ve been as aimless in life as me, discovered you wish to achieve but have nowhere to aim,then got game, and aimed.
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to make it worth your time having clicked, here is a thing I wrote yesteryear. I commented of it in passing recently, and Roxi St Clair said he’d like to hear it. Well Roxi, here’s to you
Deep crimson wine
Coloured the blood on my sword,
the sword of my heart,
the heart of my dreams.
Like ex calibre.
In a swamp of frustration.
Tell them you first read it here ... & say it's only a first draft!